08-27-2017, 09:42 PM
Wjames,
Never apologize for critique! It is always helpful, no matter how harsh. Some of the poem is supposed to be sappy, but there is a theme that I want to progress to beyond it. If the reader only sees the cliche, then I am not doing my job well enough. I'll review and edit, taking your critique into account. It is very helpful.
Never apologize for critique! It is always helpful, no matter how harsh. Some of the poem is supposed to be sappy, but there is a theme that I want to progress to beyond it. If the reader only sees the cliche, then I am not doing my job well enough. I'll review and edit, taking your critique into account. It is very helpful.
I've always wanted to live in a world where it's okay to pronounce both L's in my name.