Together, apart
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Wjames,

Never apologize for critique! It is always helpful, no matter how harsh. Some of the poem is supposed to be sappy, but there is a theme that I want to progress to beyond it. If the reader only sees the cliche, then I am not doing my job well enough. I'll review and edit, taking your critique into account. It is very helpful.
I've always wanted to live in a world where it's okay to pronounce both L's in my name.
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Together, apart - by fuzzyllama1 - 08-23-2017, 11:58 AM
RE: Together, apart - by Wjames - 08-27-2017, 03:31 AM
RE: Together, apart - by fuzzyllama1 - 08-27-2017, 09:42 PM
RE: Together, apart - by DiamondTom24 - 02-13-2018, 06:48 PM
RE: Together, apart - by TemporaryForever - 02-14-2018, 04:57 AM
RE: Together, apart - by poetkitten - 02-16-2018, 08:26 AM



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