08-26-2017, 02:54 AM
(08-10-2017, 06:44 PM)Achebe Wrote: I couldn't connect the picture to the poem...?
The first strophe hints at something political, but I can't follow ththink second and third.
I like 'lies'/'white', but not 'white/night'. Sticking to slant rhymes might be better here
Thanks. Worked with it and changed the last stanza in response to your and vagabond's comments.
The clothes in the picture are a literal illustration of the metaphorical ones in the poem.
I tried doing more slants, but the perfect ones rebelled...
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions

