08-22-2017, 08:16 PM
First edit is up! thanks again for the comments!
@Richard: I hope that with this draft i've explained the 'equal in fate' a bit better by changign the wording.
I liked your suggestion of giving the suits a season (or rather to expand on it), I've managed to fit it in - but i still feel its a bit too rough on the edges, though.
@Richard: I hope that with this draft i've explained the 'equal in fate' a bit better by changign the wording.
I liked your suggestion of giving the suits a season (or rather to expand on it), I've managed to fit it in - but i still feel its a bit too rough on the edges, though.