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Gingerly - Edit 1

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08-22-2017, 08:19 AM

Thanks for all your thoughts!

After thinking about it I agree about the enjambment in the first stanza, Tiger, and I like Todd's metaphor idea there, so I changed it.

Thanks again!

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Gingerly - Edit 1 - by Wjames - 08-18-2017, 08:47 AM

RE: Gingerly - by just mercedes - 08-18-2017, 09:52 AM

RE: Gingerly - by Tiger the Lion - 08-18-2017, 01:43 PM

RE: Gingerly - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 08-19-2017, 03:42 AM

RE: Gingerly - by Todd - 08-19-2017, 03:49 AM

RE: Gingerly - by vagabond - 08-19-2017, 12:24 PM

RE: Gingerly - by Wjames - 08-22-2017, 08:19 AM

RE: Gingerly - Edit 1 - by RiverNotch - 08-23-2017, 12:12 AM

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