Sam's Song

[Ecesis]

thanks for the detailed reply richard. no not historical, just a projected character to base the writing around. okay, well i considered morality as a throne to be proud of, or considered a personal height of some sought; being lost to him. haha, yes your right i'll use over.
im going to ask you, is it understandable ?

i'll make a big edit then hopefully repost it sometime soon.
what do you think of symbolism in general ?
because i have another poem called "the monk" in the mild to moderate critique forms and i was slandered for my tortured symbolism, i was wondering if you could go take a look and tell me what you think?
i'll be sure to check some of your work.
the beauty of reciprocation.

thanks again richard