The Monk

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08-21-2017, 02:00 AM

(08-20-2017, 01:29 PM)Ecesis Wrote: okay, i understand that. would you think simplifying the language would be the most effective way to do that?
i appreciate the feedback.

It's not a matter of simplifying the language, more of rephrasing your lines.

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The Monk - by Ecesis - 08-17-2017, 02:04 PM

RE: The Monk - by alonso ramoran - 08-18-2017, 02:11 AM

RE: The Monk - by Wjames - 08-18-2017, 08:44 AM

RE: The Monk - by Ecesis - 08-18-2017, 08:44 AM

RE: The Monk - by alonso ramoran - 08-18-2017, 09:46 AM

RE: The Monk - by Achebe - 08-20-2017, 09:13 PM

RE: The Monk - by Ecesis - 08-20-2017, 01:29 PM

RE: The Monk - by alonso ramoran - 08-21-2017, 02:00 AM

RE: The Monk - by Ecesis - 08-21-2017, 05:17 PM

RE: The Monk - by alonso ramoran - 09-15-2017, 10:16 AM

RE: The Monk - by Richard - 08-22-2017, 04:01 AM

RE: The Monk - by Yjack123 - 09-16-2017, 11:31 AM

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