08-19-2017, 08:35 AM
Hey CRNDLSM!
Thanks for taking your time to comment.
As you've noticed, the main thematic in the poem is time and its chronology; i wanted to build it up from Seconds -> Minutes -> hour(glass) etc.
Regarding the days gathering on the weekend, I thought it was fitting, as it keeps the continuity from Day -> week, they're there to gather and close the week off.
Generations were indeed meant to be human instead as a measurement of time; every decade births a new generation and with each decade past, the generation 'grows' - it is somewhat nurtured/groomed by time.
hope that clears it up a bit!
Thanks for taking your time to comment.
As you've noticed, the main thematic in the poem is time and its chronology; i wanted to build it up from Seconds -> Minutes -> hour(glass) etc.
Regarding the days gathering on the weekend, I thought it was fitting, as it keeps the continuity from Day -> week, they're there to gather and close the week off.
Generations were indeed meant to be human instead as a measurement of time; every decade births a new generation and with each decade past, the generation 'grows' - it is somewhat nurtured/groomed by time.
hope that clears it up a bit!