08-19-2017, 08:09 AM
I like the idea and title it's a nice package, there are some weight issues. Seconds counting minutes in an hourglass. I would think minutes count seconds, but the hourglass is just an object. Days gathering on a weekend doesn't make sense to me, not with the number 7. Generation seems more human than anything, so 12 months being a year, telling decades to groom people for centuries also doesn't make sense to me. First and last lines are the best. More so the last.
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