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Gingerly - Edit 1

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08-19-2017, 03:42 AM

Loved the read Wjames!

Personally, I don't think that the 'down' at the very end adds anything to the work. I'd scrap it completely.

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Gingerly - Edit 1 - by Wjames - 08-18-2017, 08:47 AM

RE: Gingerly - by just mercedes - 08-18-2017, 09:52 AM

RE: Gingerly - by Tiger the Lion - 08-18-2017, 01:43 PM

RE: Gingerly - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 08-19-2017, 03:42 AM

RE: Gingerly - by Todd - 08-19-2017, 03:49 AM

RE: Gingerly - by vagabond - 08-19-2017, 12:24 PM

RE: Gingerly - by Wjames - 08-22-2017, 08:19 AM

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