Long Ago
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This is a good fart joke. I was thinking so critically about the slow progression, the parallels between strophes (kinda like we will rock you by queen) then I was about to complain about the last strophe when the child pulled his finger and a terrible stench filled the room. I loved the ending, I would t know what else to say
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Long Ago - by DS85 - 08-16-2017, 03:48 AM
RE: Long Ago - by CRNDLSM - 08-17-2017, 10:39 AM
RE: Long Ago - by Tiger the Lion - 08-18-2017, 02:03 AM
RE: Long Ago - by billy - 08-22-2017, 05:29 PM
RE: Long Ago - by nibbed - 08-23-2017, 02:34 AM



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