Sonnet "Mayapple Flower"
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Beneath the twin umbrella leaves that fold
with gentle curvature like praying hands,
hides a single flower, white and gold,
like shreds of linen in Egyptian sands -
a mystery - the prelude to a treasure.
Approach its beauty like a priest in the night -
a priest who serves the doleful goddess Pleasure -
and kneel to see the blooming gold and white,
a living jewel fed by the ancient root,
and shrouded by the two dark-spreading veils.
In time, the flower will become a fruit.
But it is dark, and you’ll  forget these trails
(although you whisper now that you will not).
The blissful gem will ripen, fall, and rot.

Please note that I am not trying for perfect iambic pentameter here. I'm focusing on five stresses, that's all.
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Sonnet "Mayapple Flower" - by alatos - 08-17-2017, 08:07 AM
RE: Sonnet "Mayapple Flower" - by dukealien - 08-20-2017, 01:02 AM
RE: Sonnet "Mayapple Flower" - by alatos - 08-22-2017, 07:49 AM
RE: Sonnet "Mayapple Flower" - by homer1950 - 08-22-2017, 03:39 PM
RE: Sonnet "Mayapple Flower" - by alatos - 08-23-2017, 11:12 PM
RE: Sonnet "Mayapple Flower" - by alonso ramoran - 09-15-2017, 10:43 AM
RE: Sonnet "Mayapple Flower" - by vagabond - 09-16-2017, 12:21 AM
RE: Sonnet "Mayapple Flower" - by Yjack123 - 09-16-2017, 11:26 AM



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