Fourth Edit: Hometown

Fourth Edit: Hometown

Richard Offline

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#15

08-12-2017, 07:53 AM

Hey lyon,
Thanks for the feedback. I especially appreciate some of your suggestions about the wording.

Thanks again,
Richard

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Fourth Edit: Hometown - by Richard - 07-17-2017, 07:25 AM

RE: Hometown - by Solstice - 07-17-2017, 12:55 PM

RE: Hometown - by nibbed - 07-17-2017, 01:49 PM

RE: Hometown - by Achebe - 07-17-2017, 08:02 PM

RE: Hometown - by Richard - 07-17-2017, 11:29 PM

RE: Hometown - by vagabond - 07-18-2017, 05:47 AM

RE: Hometown - by Richard - 07-20-2017, 05:20 AM

RE: First Edit: Hometown - by lyon - 08-09-2017, 01:45 AM

RE: Third Edit: Hometown - by Richard - 08-12-2017, 07:53 AM

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