08-10-2017, 06:44 PM
I couldn't connect the picture to the poem...?
The first strophe hints at something political, but I can't follow ththink second and third.
I like 'lies'/'white', but not 'white/night'. Sticking to slant rhymes might be better here
The first strophe hints at something political, but I can't follow ththink second and third.
I like 'lies'/'white', but not 'white/night'. Sticking to slant rhymes might be better here
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe