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(08-09-2017, 03:25 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  11:18
 
what if I called now
and let it ring
 
just once—
would you dream of me?


take out the last line of the poem, it forces the title of the poem to interact with the remaining text with a heightened sense of mystery
plutocratic polyphonous pandering 
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11:18 - by Tiger the Lion - 08-09-2017, 03:25 PM
RE: 11:18 - by Thunderembargo - 08-09-2017, 11:33 PM
RE: 11:18 - by nibbed - 08-10-2017, 01:28 AM



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