08-08-2017, 04:47 PM
hello bernie, i've just recently joined so i will keep this reply short as i'm still browsing/getting to know the site.
i would say regarding this, that before looking for scenes and metaphors to add, it would be pleasant to look for distant words or sounds within them that could really add to the effulgence of the poem. e.g laurel, clepsydra, clou etc. to name a few. though these are objects, sometimes one syllable or letter can really grope at the audiences aptitude for being delighted.
i would say regarding this, that before looking for scenes and metaphors to add, it would be pleasant to look for distant words or sounds within them that could really add to the effulgence of the poem. e.g laurel, clepsydra, clou etc. to name a few. though these are objects, sometimes one syllable or letter can really grope at the audiences aptitude for being delighted.