Birthmark (Edit Two)

[typing mantis]

Hi,

I really loved the parts:

Your gut was always stronger
than mine. Complex biology
made simple, women have wider hips
men have wider eyes.
I saw her coming,
You felt her


and


I forgot to make an entrance
and an exit
You were the only one
who figured out
You could just step over the edges. 

Gives me a sense of how supernaturally perceptive she was.

But I had trouble reading the poem because of the use of punctuation, for example, full stops in the middle of a line.