Slow Hours

Slow Hours

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08-06-2017, 05:08 AM

Thanks all for your thoughtful suggestions and comments. I've updated the poem. However, although this is apparently unpopular, I'm pretty set on the repetition. To me, it adds the the rhythmic, dreamlike mood I'm trying to evoke.

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Slow Hours - by alatos - 08-04-2017, 04:12 AM

RE: Slow Hours - by fuzzyllama1 - 08-04-2017, 04:39 AM

RE: Slow Hours - by Lydish - 08-04-2017, 04:42 AM

RE: Slow Hours - by Tiger the Lion - 08-04-2017, 04:47 AM

RE: Slow Hours - by nibbed - 08-04-2017, 05:43 AM

RE: Slow Hours - by alatos - 08-04-2017, 09:34 PM

RE: Slow Hours - by Achebe - 08-05-2017, 03:39 AM

RE: Slow Hours - by billy - 08-05-2017, 09:37 AM

RE: Slow Hours - by alatos - 08-06-2017, 05:08 AM

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