The First Time God Speaks to You (Revision 2)

The First Time God Speaks to You (Revision 2)

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08-05-2017, 03:55 AM

Thank you, Achebe. I made some slight alterations (I wasn't fond of they say either). Thanks for pushing me. I hope this latest change is an improvement.

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Todd

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The First Time God Speaks to You (Revision 2) - by Todd - 07-28-2017, 11:44 PM

RE: The First Time God Speaks to You - by nibbed - 07-29-2017, 06:20 AM

RE: The First Time God Speaks to You - by Todd - 07-30-2017, 09:33 AM

RE: The First Time God Speaks to You - by Lizzie - 07-31-2017, 04:18 AM

RE: The First Time God Speaks to You - by Todd - 08-01-2017, 12:34 AM

RE: The First Time God Speaks to You - by fuzzyllama1 - 08-01-2017, 03:46 AM

RE: The First Time God Speaks to You - by Todd - 08-02-2017, 02:24 AM

RE: The First Time God Speaks to You (Revision) - by Todd - 08-03-2017, 06:46 AM

RE: The First Time God Speaks to You (Revision) - by Achebe - 08-05-2017, 01:07 AM

RE: The First Time God Speaks to You (Revision 2) - by Todd - 08-05-2017, 03:55 AM

RE: The First Time God Speaks to You (Revision 2) - by Achebe - 08-08-2017, 08:11 AM

RE: The First Time God Speaks to You (Revision 2) - by fuzzyllama1 - 08-05-2017, 04:35 AM

RE: The First Time God Speaks to You (Revision 2) - by Todd - 08-05-2017, 04:47 AM

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