European holiday part 1
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(07-17-2017, 07:52 PM)Achebe Wrote:  Americans, Americans everywhere
with their bright optimistic faces -
Mary and Paul from Wichita Falls
to Lou and Beth from Dallas -
You're from the big town, fellas -
then click click click at the grim statue 
of Pallas Athena.
Australians, Australians, everywhere -
a pair of six foot lasses 
(weaned on what amazons drink
'twixt swim and rugby classes),
Sydney girls, hook up with boys
from (of all places) Newcastle
and head to smoke filled coffee bars
to see the stars.
Meanwhile, Lars,
the silent Finn
thinks of something inscrutable,
at the next table.
Brit holidayers everywhere -
Sarah and Chris
from Shepherd's Bush, trundle their bundles
of fancy clothes
because you must dress well, Chris thinks,
if you plan to propose
on the Rialto bridge, with its delicate pinks
and whites, but really, no one cares
if you're proposing there, 
not even if you're Joe Pesci,
but for the illegal Bangladeshi
trying to sell you a rose.
Yes, this is an attractive poem.   A flash of revery, whimsy, serendipity and gleaming cheer.   Many thanks for holding and capturing the kinds of fleeting moments which are so difficult to capture and frame, precisely because they are generally so dowsed and under the spell of momentary carousing and drunkenness.   This was fresh and clear and bubbly.
plutocratic polyphonous pandering 
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European holiday part 1 - by Achebe - 07-17-2017, 07:52 PM
RE: European holiday part 1 - by dukealien - 07-18-2017, 10:16 PM
RE: European holiday part 1 - by Achebe - 07-23-2017, 07:08 AM
RE: European holiday part 1 - by Thunderembargo - 08-01-2017, 04:51 AM
RE: European holiday part 1 - by Lizzie - 08-03-2017, 10:36 AM
RE: European holiday part 1 - by nibbed - 08-03-2017, 12:07 PM



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