Black Hole
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(07-20-2017, 06:56 AM)The Four-Eyed Cat Wrote:  I was the center of attention.
A bright prodigy;
born from a cosmic cradle,
collapsed under the gaze
of a million demanding stars.
Dreams and expectations crushed
by bending their rules of nature.
Now it all revolves around me,
not them, us, nor you,
only I in singularity.
The last line nails it! One quibble - "born from" seems a bit off, I would suggest "born to."
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Black Hole - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 07-20-2017, 06:56 AM
RE: Black Hole - by Todd - 07-20-2017, 07:12 AM
RE: Black Hole - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 07-20-2017, 07:26 AM
RE: Black Hole - by Old Tiger - 07-31-2017, 02:11 PM



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