Lois Lane's Testimony at the Inquest (Revision 3)

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Lois Lane's Testimony at the Inquest (Revision 3)

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07-31-2017, 10:19 AM

Hey Todd,
I think this version is an improvement. I like the addition of Doomsday in there, and its double meaning is nice.

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Richard

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Lois Lane's Testimony at the Inquest (Revision 3) - by Todd - 07-20-2017, 05:39 AM

RE: Lane's Testimony at the Inquest - by Tiger the Lion - 07-20-2017, 01:43 PM

RE: Lane's Testimony at the Inquest - by Todd - 07-20-2017, 01:58 PM

RE: Lane's Testimony at the Inquest (Revision) - by Todd - 07-20-2017, 10:52 PM

RE: Lane's Testimony at the Inquest (Revision) - by CRNDLSM - 07-20-2017, 11:53 PM

RE: Lane's Testimony at the Inquest (Revision) - by Todd - 07-21-2017, 03:42 AM

RE: Lane's Testimony at the Inquest (Revision) - by Richard - 07-21-2017, 03:15 AM

RE: Lane's Testimony at the Inquest (Revision) - by Todd - 07-21-2017, 04:22 AM

RE: Lane's Testimony at the Inquest (Revision 2) - by Todd - 07-21-2017, 04:36 AM

RE: Lois Lane's Testimony at the Inquest (Revision 2) - by Richard - 07-31-2017, 10:19 AM

RE: Lois Lane's Testimony at the Inquest (Revision 2) - by Todd - 08-01-2017, 12:31 AM

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