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Fourth Edit: Hometown

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07-31-2017, 10:11 AM

Hey Lizzie, Janine, and RiverNotch,
Thanks for the feedback. I feel like I have an idea here of what I want to say, but then it feels like the words just don't want to come together on this one. Another edit is definitely in the works.

Thanks again,
Richard

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Fourth Edit: Hometown - by Richard - 07-17-2017, 07:25 AM

RE: Hometown - by Solstice - 07-17-2017, 12:55 PM

RE: Hometown - by nibbed - 07-17-2017, 01:49 PM

RE: Hometown - by Achebe - 07-17-2017, 08:02 PM

RE: Hometown - by Richard - 07-17-2017, 11:29 PM

RE: Hometown - by vagabond - 07-18-2017, 05:47 AM

RE: Hometown - by Richard - 07-20-2017, 05:20 AM

RE: First Edit: Hometown - by RiverNotch - 07-26-2017, 02:30 PM

RE: First Edit: Hometown - by nibbed - 07-28-2017, 01:00 PM

RE: First Edit: Hometown - by Lizzie - 07-31-2017, 03:13 AM

RE: First Edit: Hometown - by Richard - 07-31-2017, 10:11 AM

RE: First Edit: Hometown - by lyon - 08-09-2017, 01:45 AM

RE: Second Edit: Hometown - by Richard - 08-11-2017, 09:57 AM

RE: Second Edit: Hometown - by lyon - 08-11-2017, 11:47 PM

RE: Third Edit: Hometown - by Richard - 08-12-2017, 07:53 AM

RE: Fourth Edit: Hometown - by Richard - 08-22-2018, 11:53 AM

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