“The chime”

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“The chime”
 
Twisted forks hanging from a fabrication                                -I actually like the use of the word fabrication
Alongside flattened spoons                                                     -once useful tools, now flattened to make noise. that's really good.
Dangling by threads fed through there souls                          -threads, once again a useful working of one word>>>>typo there
They dance when the wind blows                                           -I suppose it is like dancing, and wind is like the encouragement of music
Their collisions creating vibrations with every gust                   -they do collide when they dance
Melody comes to being, an entity unto itself                            -necessary comma?
Patterns, beautifully and harmoniously chaotic                        - Patterns?
Bring forth joy in balance.                                                       - nice




I wonder if you had as much fun writing it
as I had reading it. Thank you for the privilege
of reading and critiquing.

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*I am wondering what your avatar is,
I cannot seem to make it larger
to see. Is it a large firearm or an anvil?
I'm curious!