Worm
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I'm on my iPad just now and it's rubbish for formatting, but I really want to come back to this. There is a lot of promise here, but it needs some polishing to bring it out. You do walk a fine line between poetry and prose, but I have a few ideas about that. I promise I'll come back, probably tomorrow... just didn't want to leave you languishing here because there's quite a bit to like.

So. Rubbish comment today, but I promise it gets better...
It could be worse
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Worm - by Wright - 07-27-2017, 12:49 PM
RE: Worm - by Leanne - 07-27-2017, 05:45 PM
RE: Worm - by Lydish - 07-28-2017, 12:43 AM
RE: Worm - by Tiger the Lion - 07-28-2017, 01:05 AM
RE: Worm - by nibbed - 07-28-2017, 10:35 AM
RE: Worm - by billy - 07-30-2017, 01:13 PM
RE: Worm - by typing mantis - 08-02-2017, 07:47 PM
RE: Worm - by BeauRessa - 08-10-2017, 12:48 PM



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