07-26-2017, 03:36 PM
yeah, this might be a little too in need of Google-fu -- i like how "the gunsel" makes "came" kinda porny, but that doesn't really add much -- so reverted, plus a possible change in title later on. as for "as", Shakespeare. ps, this plays with jm's "fat man, little boy", though i'm not sure i quite succeeded.

