Populating II
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I don't quite like this, not as much as I do the first one. The wordplay behind "seminal", and the whole hilarious fact that the earlier could be read as an ode to masturbation -- this one lacks the wit of the earlier, and the warmth doesn't translate as warmth for me, the contrast between the hot male and the weak female is a little unsavory, and "loth" is a bit of an undue throwback.
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Populating II - by dukealien - 07-25-2017, 05:24 AM
RE: Populating II - by just mercedes - 07-25-2017, 02:23 PM
RE: Populating II - by RiverNotch - 07-26-2017, 01:19 PM
RE: Populating II - by dukealien - 07-26-2017, 10:39 PM
RE: Populating II - by nibbed - 07-28-2017, 05:48 AM
RE: Populating II - by Thunderembargo - 08-02-2017, 10:51 PM



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