The Orator & the Interview

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Before the crowd I like the intro because of where an orator would stand
had formed before not crazy about this second before
the ticket counter,
he spoke to a mirror nice set up though with line breaks
in his parent's basement
washroom.daydreaming? Basements have washrooms? I'm already picturing Robert deniro in King Of Comedy

His monologue was a condensed I'd remove 'a' It cuddles the line break for me
reflection on the human condition,
a Shakespearean dissection interesting
replete with suffering, melodrama,replete good word
and tribulation:these three things to me all seem the same thing, maybe no 'and' here 

"Do you like to play chess, Mr. Abernathy? Close quotation?

I'm not all that good, but I love it oh this is the same speaker, wait is he still alone in the washroom? Was he alone? Is this the Shakespearean dissection?
when two bucks smack horns
until one is pinned, and a queen is taken.deer and chess I don't see fitting together, though I like both images separately 

Have you ever peered into the eyes
of a pinned buck, Mr. Abernathy?pinned? Shot and dying?

They look away immediately,
too submissive to challenge
a simple glance. Universal observation

In any case, Mr. Abernathy,
I'm in need of a job. Ticket counter? Who's the buck? I picture someone psyching themself up for a job interview and kind of intimidating tone by repeating the man's last name and emphasizing chess and bucks, but altogether I feel some lacking

What do you say?" I want some revolution back to the beginning or response from Abernathy, resolution.  Anyways your writing style is very engaging.