Standing in platform shoes (prose)

[just mercedes]

You stayed true to the perceptions of an adolescent boy, without making fun of them, which I like. I feel the N is relating from years later, but doesn't use an adult voice or make excuses, so it's as though time has actually rewound to those moments, then slowly plays forward again.

Telling time by footwear fashion. I like it.

A couple of hiccups - 'if' in the first line should be 'in', some redundnacy (I say), easily tightened up. Thanks for posting.