Watchtower
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This is really cool. Just a thought you could add another element of Jehovah Witness history by inserting a line about the invisible return of Christ maybe in the below section.

But you're lookin' and lookin' and lookin'
when the beast is in Brooklyn.

Truly just a thought. The poem holds together well start to finish.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Watchtower - by Tiger the Lion - 07-20-2017, 03:26 PM
RE: Watchtower - by dukealien - 07-21-2017, 05:51 AM
RE: Watchtower - by Todd - 07-21-2017, 06:25 AM
RE: Watchtower - by Thunderembargo - 08-02-2017, 10:21 PM
RE: Watchtower - by nibbed - 08-03-2017, 07:06 AM
RE: Watchtower - by Tiger the Lion - 08-03-2017, 06:58 PM



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