This is really cool. Just a thought you could add another element of Jehovah Witness history by inserting a line about the invisible return of Christ maybe in the below section.
But you're lookin' and lookin' and lookin'
when the beast is in Brooklyn.
Truly just a thought. The poem holds together well start to finish.
But you're lookin' and lookin' and lookin'
when the beast is in Brooklyn.
Truly just a thought. The poem holds together well start to finish.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
