Lois Lane's Testimony at the Inquest (Revision 3)
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Paul, thanks! Popped seems obvious now that you mention it. I can optionally keep opened and replace flew with popped. I'll give both options some thought, but you're right popped needs to be there. I'll look at the fragment and the save line on revision. Thanks for the help.

Best, Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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RE: Lane's Testimony at the Inquest - by Todd - 07-20-2017, 01:58 PM



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