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07-20-2017, 07:26 AM

Hey Todd!

Thanks for the comment! I agree with you on removing 'aspiring pupil', removing it also seems to make it flow just a little bit better.

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Black Hole - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 07-20-2017, 06:56 AM

RE: Black Hole - by Todd - 07-20-2017, 07:12 AM

RE: Black Hole - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 07-20-2017, 07:26 AM

RE: Black Hole - by Old Tiger - 07-31-2017, 02:11 PM

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