Fountain of Cheese
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thanks for the readings. i still find the whole being one sentence to be the smoothest read, so probably no alterations in that department

while as for the title, i'd actually meant that to refer to the piece's general sentiment. but right, cheese could also be mature --

again, thanks for the readings.
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Fountain of Cheese - by RiverNotch - 07-15-2017, 10:26 PM
RE: Fountain of Cheese - by dukealien - 07-16-2017, 06:10 AM
RE: Fountain of Cheese - by CRNDLSM - 07-17-2017, 03:38 AM
RE: Fountain of Cheese - by nibbed - 07-17-2017, 02:07 PM
RE: Fountain of Cheese - by Achebe - 07-17-2017, 05:08 PM
RE: Fountain of Cheese - by RiverNotch - 07-19-2017, 02:21 PM



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