undifined expression

[CRNDLSM]

“Undefined expression”
 
Pictures I've drawn draw me in and I become one with them
As they are me and mine, a making of my mind
The images of my imagination expressed in several mediums
A multitude of disciplines endlessly creating something within
To be set free, set free despite myself I really like everything before this boldened phrase, the wordiness is fun even
 
How full am I to burst from that which I can’t converse
But to express in less than words something that hurts or does not work
A bleeding heart plain to see set in the open
Its beaten beats bring tears to my eyes
As I defy that which would have me die I thought the internal rhymes in the first part were clever but I think overdone this second part, particularly the boldened part, and 'that which would have' is too wordy I think to end on 'die' 
 
Dry your eyes
Open your minds
Flow from what cannot be defined.the last line seems like it should be the title because the poem is a flow from what you're saying is undefined.  Too statefully matter of fact, could have more impact somehow.



I'm by no means a pro of any kind lol , but i do enjoy putting my thoughts on paper in the form of poetry and short lyrical stories. really looking forward to your comments

really enjoyed that word romp