My favourite story

[Keith]

I think he might just write my favourite story as well.

I like the contrast of "only writes on his good days" with "each morning his stick taps..." -- so he never abandons his routine of coffee, pastry and possibility, but the writing is not so consistent.  There is gentleness throughout, a thoughtful connection with the sensory world, but it is not entirely where he lives.  He lives in memory and anticipation.

I'm going to come back to this because I've just got something in my eye.

Thank you for the comments Leanne, I really glad that all that comes across, its good to know what works. Best Keith