Metanoia
#5
Thanks for the feedback guys! I appreciate it. The lack of punctuation and capitalization was as a result of trying to experiment with different formatting. In retrospect, that was a bad idea. I'll work on making this poem better and keep your feedback in mind.
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Metanoia - by Ateri - 07-13-2017, 10:27 AM
RE: Metanoia - by ellajam - 07-14-2017, 05:38 AM
RE: Metanoia - by tectak - 07-15-2017, 02:28 AM
RE: Metanoia - by Richard - 07-15-2017, 02:47 AM
RE: Metanoia - by Ateri - 07-15-2017, 10:57 AM
RE: Metanoia - by Keith - 07-15-2017, 08:46 PM



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