07-15-2017, 07:39 AM
Hi, CRNDLSM.
I like the poem, in its ready for action appearance.
I would have to disagree with one of the critiques, in that I think it is a sign of maturity to bend in the wind. It reminds me of a Bible verse that you may want to look up. "... but rather, like the palm, which bends in the wind, so as not to break."
It may give more credibility to the Babel reference.
I like the poem, in its ready for action appearance.
I would have to disagree with one of the critiques, in that I think it is a sign of maturity to bend in the wind. It reminds me of a Bible verse that you may want to look up. "... but rather, like the palm, which bends in the wind, so as not to break."
It may give more credibility to the Babel reference.