Hackneyed love song

[Achebe]

Edit 1

I'm in love with you.
It doesn't look like love,
the cliched meet cute drill,
but there's a twinkling in the sky 
when we converse, you and I,
and the wind falls still.
If it isn't love, call it what you will.




Original

I think I'm in love with you
though it doesn't look like love,
the cliched meet cute drill.
But there's a kind of twinkling in the sky 
when we converse, you and I,
and the wind falls suddenly still.
It isn't love, then call it what you will.