Cherished
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I couldn't play the video so had to go to YT.

(07-13-2017, 11:29 AM)ellajam Wrote:  Cherished

Blarney Girls Band
plays Thai Rock on Jamaica Bay:
long tables of New York Irish families, I would strike this first instance of families. Sounds tight without it and avoids the repetition.
aging Jewish schoolmate/FB pals,
Asian families trickling home late
to a shared meal.

Eating and drinking,
grinning, clapping, jigging, no fiddling?

fortified for the morning news. fortified is a great word choice Thumbsup

Thanks for the jig Ella.
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Cherished - by ellajam - 07-13-2017, 11:29 AM
RE: Cherished - by Tiger the Lion - 07-14-2017, 01:47 AM
RE: Cherished - by ellajam - 07-14-2017, 02:07 AM



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