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Now I've Seen Everything

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07-11-2017, 05:08 PM

(06-28-2017, 07:10 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Now I’ve Seen Everything

you in those beaten jeans
mouthing the words
to Rhianna’s Rude Boy
in our kitchen—

your hips

Fantastic imagery, definitely compliments your other poem The Wife. Again something almost anyone could relate to.

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Now I've Seen Everything - by Tiger the Lion - 06-28-2017, 07:10 AM

RE: Now I've Seen Everything - by ellajam - 06-28-2017, 07:40 AM

RE: Now I've Seen Everything - by Tiger the Lion - 07-05-2017, 11:02 PM

RE: Now I've Seen Everything - by Bits - 07-11-2017, 05:08 PM

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