07-09-2017, 08:30 PM
What a huge difference between the words on the page and the words through the ear. I like the way your sing-song narrative first sounds unthreatening, like a children's verse - then, somehow, not so nice.
Stealing a chair - taking away the solid ground? For me there's a relationship between the narrator and the person addressed which feels at the same time like a class contrast, and a line from Queen - '...very very frightening...'
Mama mia - I like this. Your voice adds a lot to the words on the page.
Stealing a chair - taking away the solid ground? For me there's a relationship between the narrator and the person addressed which feels at the same time like a class contrast, and a line from Queen - '...very very frightening...'
Mama mia - I like this. Your voice adds a lot to the words on the page.