I have you
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This is a fun read, especially L2, though the whole of it is fun to read.

Quote:I have you by one other chain, cuffed and linked yet feeling free;
a clever cleat that slips yet holds... me to you and you to me.

I'm not thrilled by the me to you stuff but I like to contemplate what the "other" is.
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I have you - by tectak - 11-07-2014, 12:55 AM
RE: I have you - by SimikPK - 11-07-2014, 01:16 AM
RE: I have you - by tectak - 11-07-2014, 01:55 AM
RE: I have you - by SimikPK - 11-07-2014, 01:57 AM
RE: I have you - by tectak - 11-07-2014, 02:05 AM
RE: I have you - by just mercedes - 11-07-2014, 05:24 AM
RE: I have you - by Erthona - 11-12-2014, 05:47 AM
RE: I have you - by ellajam - 07-09-2017, 10:30 AM



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