Prothalamion revisited
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(07-08-2017, 01:00 AM)Achebe Wrote:  Sweet Themmes, run softly
for the day is not long
to close, and she
not among
those thronging on your banks,
though the hour draws near
where I end my song.
Hey Achebe. With a little patience I found the original, which was new to me. So thanks for that. There is a subtlety to the rhymes that I really enjoyed. Especially the slanted "among" dead in the middle.
Cheers for the read. 
Paul
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Prothalamion revisited - by Achebe - 07-08-2017, 01:00 AM
RE: Prothalamion revisited - by Tiger the Lion - 07-08-2017, 02:14 AM
RE: Prothalamion revisited - by ellajam - 07-08-2017, 02:19 AM
RE: Prothalamion revisited - by Achebe - 07-08-2017, 04:02 AM
RE: Prothalamion revisited - by Tiger the Lion - 07-08-2017, 04:16 AM



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