07-04-2017, 03:03 AM
Edit;
Mylar/Helium
Glitter-blue, a cartoon star
birthday helium balloon
wrinkled, half-inflated
crosses six busy freeway lanes
low, cat-played
by unsettled crosswinds.
Mylar abides forever
unbiodegradable;
helium, like hydrogen
but less so, contrives
escape from all confinements.
As between flesh and spirit
meme and material
which is Mylar and which helium?
Flesh escapes, evanesces,
recycles after giving
life its declining lift
but meme and spirit
though they rest and tatter
seeming empty or forgotten
nonetheless endure.
Thanks to both critics for good ideas, some of which have been adopted... more or less.
@The Four-Eyed Cat - the idea of the balloon outliving its birthday child is so good it deserves its own poem, IMHO. So I stuck with half-baked philosophy for this one.
@achebe - this is an exploration of sorts: there are no minds, hence no memes, without hardware to run them... but memes (which evolve, degrade, and stuff) can obviously outlive any hardware (so why not spirits?) Yes, material/sprit is reversed from the commonsense solid/gas. Turning things around and over sometimes leads to insights... or not. Thanks for the critique and the read.
Mylar/Helium
Glitter-blue, a cartoon star
birthday helium balloon
wrinkled, half-inflated
crosses six busy freeway lanes
low, cat-played
by unsettled crosswinds.
Mylar abides forever
unbiodegradable;
helium, like hydrogen
but less so, contrives
escape from all confinements.
As between flesh and spirit
meme and material
which is Mylar and which helium?
Flesh escapes, evanesces,
recycles after giving
life its declining lift
but meme and spirit
though they rest and tatter
seeming empty or forgotten
nonetheless endure.
Thanks to both critics for good ideas, some of which have been adopted... more or less.
@The Four-Eyed Cat - the idea of the balloon outliving its birthday child is so good it deserves its own poem, IMHO. So I stuck with half-baked philosophy for this one.
@achebe - this is an exploration of sorts: there are no minds, hence no memes, without hardware to run them... but memes (which evolve, degrade, and stuff) can obviously outlive any hardware (so why not spirits?) Yes, material/sprit is reversed from the commonsense solid/gas. Turning things around and over sometimes leads to insights... or not. Thanks for the critique and the read.
Non-practicing atheist

