First Edit: The Last Flower

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First Edit: The Last Flower

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07-03-2017, 05:45 AM

Hey all,
I've revised this poem. I went in a different direction with the first part of it, so please let me know if it's an improvement.

Thanks in advance,
Richard

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First Edit: The Last Flower - by Richard - 07-01-2017, 01:27 PM

RE: The Last Flower - by Achebe - 07-01-2017, 01:54 PM

RE: The Last Flower - by just mercedes - 07-01-2017, 05:53 PM

RE: The Last Flower - by vagabond - 07-01-2017, 09:41 PM

RE: The Last Flower - by Richard - 07-02-2017, 04:34 AM

RE: First Edit: The Last Flower - by Richard - 07-03-2017, 05:45 AM

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