members artwork

[shemthepenman]

The first one is gritty and real, it links well with the starkness of the poem, love the eyes and the bony cleavage, it would be cool if the was blackboard paint next to the "this is not art" so viewers could write something? intereact?

the second reminds me of rolling tobaco, old ladies and china tea cups. No fucking idea why.

the third is awsome but doesnt look finished the red looks too clean for the image, it could be bleeding into the draw back or ascending into darker shades somehow.

Just thoughts and ramblings Shem hope you dont mind. Keith

none of these are really finished, just to be sure. but you are right, the last one is less finished, in the sense that, the others i could probably leave as is and just put them out of my mind as "finished"; although, i like the idea of the chalk board on the first... i will think on.
the last one, however, is definitely unfinished. so hopefully it all works out in the end. cheers. and just a side note, i'd take honesty, no matter how brutal, over polite platitudes all day long.