mighty shy muse (edit)

[vagabond]

 mighty shy muse                                                                                 (1st edit thanks mercedes, nibbed)
 

lousy little underweight muse
feral furry creature of blues
come, cutie, I´m too obtuse
 
sticky sentences disrupted
picky issues well neglected
icky words again retracted
 
trembling you tend to the dark
obvious lies you´ll distort 
stories as short-lived as sparks

send a dragon, scorch my chains
bend and burn the rules away
mend the dreams, let chaos reign

freedom does not move in marches
fire? not for those who fear torches...
again, your voice gone, I am searching






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mighty shy muse



lousy little underweight muse
feral furry creature of blues
come, cutie, I´m too obtuse
 
sticky sentences disrupted
picky issues well neglected
icky words again retracted
 
trembling you tend to the dark
my stories are short-lived like sparks
at least obvious lies you´ll distort 
 
send us Thorn to fly astray,
bend and burn the rules away,
mend the dreams, let chaos reign
 
freedom moves never in marches.
dragons? not for those who fear torches…
again, your voice faded, I´m searching.
 

 

mainly I hope for interpretations, responses wether and what kind of meaning can be drawn from this, but any type of comment is appreciated including harsh critique, pointing out embarrassing spelling or grammar errors, jokes, deviations from topic and surreal associations.