07-01-2017, 08:39 PM
The first one is gritty and real, it links well with the starkness of the poem, love the eyes and the bony cleavage, it would be cool if the was blackboard paint next to the "this is not art" so viewers could write something? intereact?
the second reminds me of rolling tobaco, old ladies and china tea cups. No fucking idea why.
the third is awsome but doesnt look finished the red looks too clean for the image, it could be bleeding into the draw back or ascending into darker shades somehow.
Just thoughts and ramblings Shem hope you dont mind. Keith
the second reminds me of rolling tobaco, old ladies and china tea cups. No fucking idea why.
the third is awsome but doesnt look finished the red looks too clean for the image, it could be bleeding into the draw back or ascending into darker shades somehow.
Just thoughts and ramblings Shem hope you dont mind. Keith
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out

