06-30-2017, 11:42 AM
What fun to read and so applicable to so many situations. People. I especially like the depth of these lines:"We've crafted careful outs -
snarky innocents"
I'll keep reading and see if any suggestion come up, but I like it as is. maybe apostrophes in the arents but maybe not, it's lazy text, might suit.
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