06-30-2017, 07:26 AM
Hi Tiger the lion
Confession
“WHAT IS IT ABOUT HER, PAUL?”
It’s too dear a secret to me
to confess to a man
I can’t be sure I know.
It’s between me and God
and I’m in enough trouble already,
so I tell the priest
she’s a good girl.
I want to embrace the charm of the poem, there seems to be an intent of charm...but I am troubled over the creepiness of the whole confessional scene where the subject is asked to spill his beans to a hidden man. Such a leading question, too. Once again, a pome that goes in many directions!
Hope your day is great!
janine
Confession
“WHAT IS IT ABOUT HER, PAUL?”
It’s too dear a secret to me
to confess to a man
I can’t be sure I know.
It’s between me and God
and I’m in enough trouble already,
so I tell the priest
she’s a good girl.
I want to embrace the charm of the poem, there seems to be an intent of charm...but I am troubled over the creepiness of the whole confessional scene where the subject is asked to spill his beans to a hidden man. Such a leading question, too. Once again, a pome that goes in many directions!
Hope your day is great!
janine
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