coma

[The Four-Eyed Cat]

coma

 
life saved: an art,                                         Perhaps make life plural?
maintained: a grace?                                   drop the question mark to add more strength to the the statement 
turned a wraith.                                           alternatively you can change the first line into a question. 
                                                                   
hope remains,
the drip sustains.                                       Are you referring to an IV with this ?
more time to fade.
 
locked in dreams,
what do they mean?                                  
lost, it seems.                

Interesting read, I really love the first two lines as they make for a great statement - is maintaing someone in a coma really the best thing the medical world can do?
Thanks for sharing, Vaga!